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Jan's avatar

Thanks for the article. When I read this section,

"Here are the questions we need to ask to decide whether any form of writing feedback is useful.

Do students understand what this feedback means and what action they need to take to improve?

If students follow the advice given in this feedback, will it make them better writers?

Is the feedback helping to improve their overall writing skills, or just improving the specific piece of work?

I wondered how teachers would react if the options applied to them. As a head and when working for local authorities I frequently observed other teachers and usually this involved giving feedback. I don't believe the observed teachers were ever asked how they'd prefer the feedback, i. e. face to face or in writing. Usually it was face to face first with a write up later. I appreciate observing one teacher is different from 30 students. If you're giving a tricky message because the lesson didn't go well in my experience, most teachers were not receptive to any type of feedback. Do students feel the same I wonder. My class teacher experience was mainly at primary age and written comments were mostly ignored in favour of a mark or whatever icon the teacher used to express the equivalent of 'well done' or ' this is a bit disappointing'.

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JaquesdeBoys's avatar

A longtime habit of mine when I worked too hard as a senior English teacher was to write vast quantities of individual feedback, and then anonymise and collate them and post them to the whole class (i.e. add them to all my other all-class advice posts). Admittedly, that's different to what you explore above, because it means my students sometimes got to read lots of personalised advice that was NOT addressed to them. I did this because (a) when applied to, say, writing skills, it both anticipates future and reinforces previous feedback that students will need or have needed; and (b) because substantive content advice in English Literature teaching is 3/4 of the work if you want your students to really know a text. For example, if a student essay on Henry V raises an interpretive point that prompts a useful reply from me, then that reply can benefit many students, not just the student who inspired it.

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